Flashback... "Daddy, something stung me."
"Are you sure something didn't just scrape against you?"
"No".
As he picks me up the attack gets more, and more frustrating every second this happened. My dad, he got stung too. The suprising part was Nick, my brother, two feet away, not a single spot on him! Infected, it got infected. Itchy, puffy, and red.
What a disaster!!!
THE END
Emilie,
ReplyDeleteI loved your use of dialogue in your story! Also, very creative. I think you have a future a as a great writer...Love, Mom
Emilie,
ReplyDeleteThat is a pretty funny story.
Emilie that was a scarere storey that happen to you.It is all so a very funny storey and I love the big comshin.
ReplyDeleteI wouldn't say it's a funny story, because who wants to get stung by a jellyfish? Not me, that's for sure. But I will say that you did a great job of making me feel your pain! Good job, Em!
ReplyDeleteThis is a funny and scary story Emilie.
ReplyDeletefunny story Emilie I bet it wasn't so funny then!
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